Notes from Lecture #9 and #10 and some of #11 of wsff

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  • What is the purpose of characters are - characters fulfill different roles, how they are used shapes your story and plot

  • How do you make your readers care about your characters?

    • Establish empathy
      • Likability
      • they are like us
      • Make them nice
      • save a cat
      • make them dance
      • show others liking them
    • Establish rooting interest - is what they want interesting to us
      • characters who want things are more interesting than those that don’t
      • there are exceptions Hitchhiker’s Guide
      • why can’t they have it
      • personal connection to the plot
      • suddenly it’s personal
    • progress
  • Three sliding scales of Empathy

    • Likability
    • Proactivity
    • Competence
  • Iconic Heroes

    • They don’t change much on those sliding scales
    • James Bond
    • Super Heroes
  • Flaws, Limitations, and Handicaps

    • Sanderson’s laws can be applied to characters
      • 1st law relates to motivation
      • Case Studies:
        • Michael Lost - lack of progress
          • Even progression backwards is better than no progress
        • Charlie Lost
      • Hit your characters hard in their flaws if you want to encourage them to change
  • Hang a lantern on it

    • It’s like saying: I know this seems like a problem, but I’ll address it later
  • Learn how to give each character a unique voice

  • Don’t info dump

  • Villains

    • Give them motivations that are worthy but put those motivations at odds with the protagonist
  • Avoid adverbs in dialogue

    • he said softly
  • Establishing shot